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model: Raquel Reed
MUA: Doe Deere for Limecrime makeup
Hair: model
Corset: TomTom
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Critique by ~x-jemp-x Apr 15, 2009, 1:40:10 AM
I'm not to sure about the blur, It does make the corset look really cute, but it takes the focus from her face*, and shoulders. It would have been nice to see more detail in the corset, and maybe just a few spangly bits?
I don't know if it's the effect you're going for, but because of the blur she seems to be lost in the pink background.
Don't get me wrong I like it!

*I think I would have created more of a contrast on her face & hair, just to bring out her features more, they just seem a little flat.

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~industrieller Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the Black hair on her,she looks more sexy and her face shape fit with it,i love perspective and her make up look very good.
i don't know why part of the pic is blurred but maybe has a meaning
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~sydneyrome Nov 7, 2009
OOOOOPS..
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Mood: Love ~sydneyrome Nov 7, 2009
Love the focus on the shimmering dress..
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Mood: Love ~sydneyrome Nov 7, 2009
Love the focus on the shimmering dress. Excellent image!!
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!PaulChristey Aug 26, 2009
very nice shot :) well done
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!kimcrAne May 20, 2009
cool effect! Very nice work!
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~MojoKiss Apr 17, 2009
blur is BACK
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~tmronin Apr 17, 2009
it's the new black.

black was the new black, but it's out again.
LOL!
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~0bsessi0n Apr 16, 2009
I love the way you focused - but I'm sure if I do like that overall color cast (though I'm sure it's intentional) other wise - it is a very well composed and stylized image!
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~xFallen-x-Angelx Apr 15, 2009
This is beautiful! I love the focus and the corset is gorgeous! Want want want!
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