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Raquel Reed - Tilt Shift by *tmronin:icontmronin:

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model: Raquel Reed
MUA: Doe Deere for Limecrime makeup
Hair: model
Corset: TomTom

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*x-jemp-x Apr 15, 2009, 12:40:10 AM
I'm not to sure about the blur, It does make the corset look really cute, but it takes the focus from her face*, and shoulders. It would have been nice to see more detail in the corset, and maybe just a few spangly bits?
I don't know if it's the effect you're going for, but because of the blur she seems to be lost in the pink background.
Don't get me wrong I like it!

*I think I would have created more of a contrast on her face & hair, just to bring out her features more, they just seem a little flat.

I hope this helps you in some way. x
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~Lomeloke Apr 14, 2009, 11:09:51 PM
impressive use of clarity! and she is very beautiful!

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if everyone loved,
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if everyone shared,
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*xFallen-x-Angelx Apr 15, 2009, 1:13:19 AM
This is beautiful! I love the focus and the corset is gorgeous! Want want want!

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~0bsessi0n Apr 16, 2009, 2:27:56 PM
I love the way you focused - but I'm sure if I do like that overall color cast (though I'm sure it's intentional) other wise - it is a very well composed and stylized image!
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~MojoKiss Apr 17, 2009, 12:32:34 PM
blur is BACK

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*tmronin Apr 17, 2009, 4:01:47 PM
it's the new black.

black was the new black, but it's out again.
LOL!

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~kimcrAne May 20, 2009, 10:52:07 PM
cool effect! Very nice work!
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~PaulChristey Aug 26, 2009, 1:27:22 PM
very nice shot :) well done

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Mood: Love ~sydneyrome Nov 7, 2009, 4:13:09 AM
Love the focus on the shimmering dress. Excellent image!!
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Mood: Love ~sydneyrome Nov 7, 2009, 4:14:09 AM
Love the focus on the shimmering dress..
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