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Raquel Reed - TomTom Corset IIby ~tmronin

Photography / Commercial Photography / Fashion

©2009-2013 ~tmronin

Raquel Reed
Makeup by Doe Deere for Limecrime
Corset by TomTom

Critique by ~Rnomad Apr 29, 2009, 5:59:12 AM

Ive mixed feelings about this.

on the +ve, love the pose, and tats, and especially the Corset. Great concept.

on the -ve side. poor lighting. The shadow on left facing arm, and chest, is distracting. The overall tone is sombre, and too dominant, it overpowers everything else.

Im left unsure what the focus was: model, corset, concept; or artistic enjoyment.

I played with PS, moding the image, tonal range and exposure, and felt it was imporoved. Even as a straight B&W the shot was better.

Sorry, its just my opinion. The world is still a better place for having the photo, than not.

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~jayjayphoto Apr 23, 2009 Professional Photographer

This is great! I love it.

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